Tears of a broken heart!

[lasanka]

an Original by lasanka.....................


when u shed a tear... i shed a hundred more deep inside...
i dont want to show how i feel im always tryin to hide..
seein the tears run down ur face is like fire to the leave...
deep within i feel that flame ignite urgin me to wipe it with my sleeve...

the sadness showin in ur eyes is comparable to my love..
for when u hurt or frown or weep... i feel it twice as more.. my dove...
i dream to tell u how i feell , i only wish i knew how...
tryin now as hard as i can, i implore for help from above..

ur love, to me is an eternal goal...
only u can make me whole...
trust ur heart and turn to me for deep down u knw its true..
my love, heart and soul... have always been for u!

ok so this isnt that gud but its aiyt i think give ur commetns... tty guys l8r tc!

[sandu_ls]

touchin........told u ure gud at writin.........gud wrk bro

[MCLINER]

oh nice bro


u r a gud poet

[azrah ghaffoor]

:D :love: :love: :love: :love: thanks!

[Kinu]

Ohhhhhh :shocked: :shocked: V didnt knw dat u r such a gud poet !!!:D :D

[Mr.DON]

lassi mokko me andane:eek: :(

[Michael]

Ohh Nice One Dude. :D

[lasanka]

touchin........told u ure gud at writin.........gud wrk bro
hehe tnx!

[lasanka]

oh nice bro


u r a gud poet
heh cool man tnx.. jus making up stuff!

[lasanka]

:D :love: :love: :love: :love: thanks!
hehe ;) all cool

[lasanka]

Ohhhhhh :shocked: :shocked: V didnt knw dat u r such a gud poet !!!:D :D
heheh tnx ch.. ah kinu! lolz

[lasanka]

lassi mokko me andane:eek: :(
andanne naa machan duk wenna epa!

[lasanka]

Ohh Nice One Dude. :D
hahah tnx bro!

[Mr.DON]

andanne naa machan duk wenna epa!
aio bung,kamak nae,ube kandulu poem ekakin dalane,mokko scenario eka?me tika kata kale nedde?

[lasanka]

eh?? nikan bung poem eka demme! heheh