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Doly
08-06-2009, 08:52 AM
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nmps
08-06-2009, 09:09 AM
Harima Lassana Hitata Wadina Nirmanayak Nanga:D:D:D:D

coolkasun
08-06-2009, 09:12 AM
Wow , Perfect ha

archirasika
08-06-2009, 09:15 AM
Ane mada nangi baba…meka dakkama oya nam kiyai “just a poem” kiyala…eth mata hitenne oya negative pattata hitanawa kiyala….
Nangi baba issara wage nahane dan itn..:no:
Kaviya nam itin lassanai, eth terumata mama kamathi naha….:(

kitty***
08-06-2009, 09:19 AM
poem eka nam lassanay nanga....

LAPD
08-06-2009, 09:30 AM
nyz poem akkio

kassaD
08-06-2009, 09:36 AM
hmmmmm.hangichcha terumak tiyana poem ekak.lassanai..eth dukak hangila tiyanawa.PS work ekath lassanai..excellent minu!

ronsilva
08-06-2009, 09:36 AM
ගැ‍හැ‍ණි‍ය‍ක්‍ ම‍හ‍ මෙ‍ර‍ ව‍ගේ‍ නො‍සෙ‍ල්‍වී‍ සි‍ටි‍ය‍ යු‍තු‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍ක්‍.. (ම‍ගේ‍ අ‍ම්‍ම‍ගෙ‍න්‍ ඇ‍ගේ‍ ජි‍වි‍ත‍ය‍ පු‍රා‍ ම‍ම‍ දැ‍ක්‍ක සැ‍බෑ‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍)

අ‍ද‍ ද‍ව‍සේ‍ කු‍ඩා‍ පැ‍ල‍ය‍ක්‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ සි‍ත‍ තු‍ල‍ රෝ‍ප‍න‍ය‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍න්නා‍ ශක්‍ති‍ය‍ හා‍ අ‍භි‍යෝ‍ග‍ය‍න්‍ට කෙ‍ලි‍න්‍ම‍ මු‍හු‍න‍ දී‍මේ‍ ශක්‍යතා‍ව‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ ම‍තු‍ දි‍න‍යේ‍ අ‍ම්‍මා‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍කු‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍පා‍ බි‍ම‍ ද‍මන්න කො‍හෙ‍ත්‍ම‍ බැ‍රි‍ ම‍හා‍ වි‍ස‍ල්‍ රු‍ක්‍ෂය‍ක්‍ බ‍ව‍ට‍ ඔ‍බ‍ව‍ ප‍රි‍පු‍ර්ණ ක‍ර‍නු‍ ල‍බ‍න්නේ‍...

නං‍ගි‍ය‍ගේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍ණය‍ සා‍ර්ථක නි‍ස‍යි‍ මෙ‍ච්‍ච‍ර‍ ක‍තා‍ ක‍ලේ‍...

Dinuka888
08-06-2009, 10:04 AM
The poem express your feeling and pain clearly
Its a very touching poem,
really you have the magic of writing that your each and every poem becomes the mirror which reflects your heart and its pain truly

comeon cutee
move ahead in your life
I want to read your poem having the feeling of joy next time
However, as a poem, liked the careful choice of words used to depict your feelings and its rhythm in most places

sihina_lahiru
08-06-2009, 10:11 AM
lassana lassana nirmanayak akka.....

j2l
08-06-2009, 11:23 AM
loku aruthak katikarapu padha peli keepayak neda ?.... lassana kathawak sangawapu kawya nirmanayak .. lassanai , eth arthaya gaththama dukai

nwnbs
08-06-2009, 11:39 AM
සාර්ථක නිර්මාණයක්...ලස්සනයි...ඒත් හිතට දුකක් දැනෙනවා...
(මම ආසම මල සේපාලිකා මල...)

Doly
08-06-2009, 12:24 PM
Harima Lassana Hitata Wadina Nirmanayak Nanga:D:D:D:D


Thank you Aiye :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 12:27 PM
Wow , Perfect ha

thanks brother

Doly
08-06-2009, 01:16 PM
Ane mada nangi baba…meka dakkama oya nam kiyai “just a poem” kiyala…eth mata hitenne oya negative pattata hitanawa kiyala….
Nangi baba issara wage nahane dan itn..:no:
Kaviya nam itin lassanai, eth terumata mama kamathi naha….:(

mama me wenakamma possitive vidiyata hithuwane aiye. danuth negative hithanneth na. mokada mage wate enna hamoma mata ehema hitannawath mawa watennewath denne na. meka attatama kaviyak vitarai. kenekta duka hitata awama hodata liyanna puluwan. sathuta athule hangila thiyena duka ekka lassana kavi liyanna puluwan. me a wage kaviyak :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 01:41 PM
poem eka nam lassanay nanga....


Thanks Kitty akki :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 01:44 PM
nyz poem akkio

Oh after lone time

where were you bro ??
anyway thnaks for the comment :)

archirasika
08-06-2009, 01:45 PM
mama me wenakamma possitive vidiyata hithuwane aiye. danuth negative hithanneth na. mokada mage wate enna hamoma mata ehema hitannawath mawa watennewath denne na. meka attatama kaviyak vitarai. kenekta duka hitata awama hodata liyanna puluwan. sathuta athule hangila thiyena duka ekka lassana kavi liyanna puluwan. me a wage kaviyak :)

hm...ehemanam kamak naha....:D

Asoka Hemantha
08-06-2009, 01:58 PM
Ane mada nangi baba…meka dakkama oya nam kiyai “just a poem” kiyala…eth mata hitenne oya negative pattata hitanawa kiyala….
Nangi baba issara wage nahane dan itn..:no:
Kaviya nam itin lassanai, eth terumata mama kamathi naha….:(
100% bro.. she is not like b4...:(:(

Doly
08-06-2009, 02:00 PM
hm...ehemanam kamak naha....:D


ekane......
dan mata kiyanna ai mama dan essara wage neme kiwwe??
ohhhhhhhhh 4got to tell u 4th colombo awa. embassy :D

chintha4u
08-06-2009, 02:14 PM
Ai sepalika malata mokada wela thiyenne ??

Doly
08-06-2009, 02:35 PM
100% bro.. she is not like b4...:(:(


Hapooooooooooo
mage aiyala dennath ekka kavi liyanna bari wei wage ;)
mokada meeeeeeee?? meka kaviyak ane
mama tamath 100% kalin nangamai :yes:

Doly
08-06-2009, 02:42 PM
hmmmmm.hangichcha terumak tiyana poem ekak.lassanai..eth dukak hangila tiyanawa.PS work ekath lassanai..excellent minu!

hmmmm!
ow...loku terumak thiyenawa
Thanks oyage comment ekata kasun aiye

Doly
08-06-2009, 04:40 PM
ගැ‍හැ‍ණි‍ය‍ක්‍ ම‍හ‍ මෙ‍ර‍ ව‍ගේ‍ නො‍සෙ‍ල්‍වී‍ සි‍ටි‍ය‍ යු‍තු‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍ක්‍.. (ම‍ගේ‍ අ‍ම්‍ම‍ගෙ‍න්‍ ඇ‍ගේ‍ ජි‍වි‍ත‍ය‍ පු‍රා‍ ම‍ම‍ දැ‍ක්‍ක සැ‍බෑ‍ දෙ‍ය‍ක්‍)

අ‍ද‍ ද‍ව‍සේ‍ කු‍ඩා‍ පැ‍ල‍ය‍ක්‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ සි‍ත‍ තු‍ල‍ රෝ‍ප‍න‍ය‍ ක‍ර‍ග‍න්නා‍ ශක්‍ති‍ය‍ හා‍ අ‍භි‍යෝ‍ග‍ය‍න්‍ට කෙ‍ලි‍න්‍ම‍ මු‍හු‍න‍ දී‍මේ‍ ශක්‍යතා‍ව‍ය‍ ත‍ම‍යි‍ ම‍තු‍ දි‍න‍යේ‍ අ‍ම්‍මා‍ කෙ‍නෙ‍කු‍ ව‍ස‍යෙ‍න්‍ ක‍පා‍ බි‍ම‍ ද‍මන්න කො‍හෙ‍ත්‍ම‍ බැ‍රි‍ ම‍හා‍ වි‍ස‍ල්‍ රු‍ක්‍ෂය‍ක්‍ බ‍ව‍ට‍ ඔ‍බ‍ව‍ ප‍රි‍පු‍ර්ණ ක‍ර‍නු‍ ල‍බ‍න්නේ‍...

නං‍ගි‍ය‍ගේ‍ නි‍ර්‍මා‍ණය‍ සා‍ර්ථක නි‍ස‍යි‍ මෙ‍ච්‍ච‍ර‍ ක‍තා‍ ක‍ලේ‍...

Aiye......

mama mage Jeevithe Yakada gahanu dennekwa dakala thiyenawa. ekkenek mage Amma. anith kena mage Akki ( Dil )

jeevitheta muna denne kohomda kiyala mama egena gatte eyalagen....
yam yam kala walidi minissunwa kadan watenawa. bimatama watenawa.duka ewara wenakam vidawanna wenawa. habai amaruwen nagittoth .....aye kawadawath watenneth na.
me mawa watuna kale. bimatama watuna kale.
nagitinna kalayak yavi. mama nagitinawamai :)

twisted
08-06-2009, 04:50 PM
lassanai nangi...if this is your way of expressing ..id say keep writing these. don't keep em inside. its a good way. nice poem.

Meeeharaka
08-06-2009, 04:53 PM
lassana galagena yana gathiyak thiyenawa kawiye....

Doly
08-06-2009, 05:39 PM
The poem express your feeling and pain clearly
Its a very touching poem,
really you have the magic of writing that your each and every poem becomes the mirror which reflects your heart and its pain truly

comeon cutee
move ahead in your life
I want to read your poem having the feeling of joy next time
However, as a poem, liked the careful choice of words used to depict your feelings and its rhythm in most places





Thanks Bro reading, understanding
and reply on my poem ...
and also grateful to you for
appreciation and encouraging words :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 05:42 PM
lassana lassana nirmanayak akka.....

Thank you Bro :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 07:11 PM
loku aruthak katikarapu padha peli keepayak neda ?.... lassana kathawak sangawapu kawya nirmanayak .. lassanai , eth arthaya gaththama dukai


Thanks Brother comment ekata :)

Doly
08-06-2009, 07:21 PM
සාර්ථක නිර්මාණයක්...ලස්සනයි...ඒත් හිතට දුකක් දැනෙනවා...
(මම ආසම මල සේපාලිකා මල...)


Thanks

Sepalika mala monataram Lassana Unath< Suwada Unath Wadak name. Udeta parawela yanawa

Doly
08-06-2009, 07:25 PM
Ai sepalika malata mokada wela thiyenne ??


Mukuth wela na
oya enne apuruwata ;)

rudayas
08-06-2009, 07:49 PM
ela :)

Doly
08-07-2009, 01:09 PM
lassanai nangi...if this is your way of expressing ..id say keep writing these. don't keep em inside. its a good way. nice poem.

thats was i did . personally i feel that we shoudnt keep pain in side:yes:
thanking you for ur comment

Doly
08-07-2009, 01:13 PM
lassana galagena yana gathiyak thiyenawa kawiye....



Thank you Brother

Anakin_Skywalker
08-07-2009, 04:52 PM
lassanaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......... elaaazzzz akiiyaaaaazzzz....

Doly
08-12-2009, 06:25 PM
lassanaiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii......... elaaazzzz akiiyaaaaazzzz....


Thanks For the comment Brother