A new track by me

[seong619]

Hey!
Today's tha first time I'm doing this site. Ma name is Seong, and I've lived in Sri Lanka for a long time. But I'm from South Korea, and in tha rap game, they call me "Chinksta". This track is named "C-Town" which stands for Colombo Town. I want you'll to listen to ma track and rate it 1 outta 10. Please help me improve ma tracks! Thank you! :rolleyes:

This is tha link to download it:
http://rapidshare.de/files/26405490/C_Town-_Chinksta.mp3.html

[Novindu]

welcome to elakiri machan...yeah i will

[GTRZ]

thats cool buddy! We'll check it out..

[Novindu]

machan as i feel its all gud but da voice needs ta be lil rough.. dun u thnk? i mean just add some weight tada voice......and gr8 work dude...

[Lich]

ill listen to it and give u my idea about it..

[DIRTY X]

machan as i feel its all gud but da voice needs ta be lil rough.. dun u thnk? i mean just add some weight tada voice......and gr8 work dude...

Ya machan that's true.
The beat, tune, rap all good.
If u put more weight on your voice it'll be great.:yes:

[Lich]

hmmmmmm...

im listening to this song..

as a normal listener

i think your track is good..



as a Musician..

ya you have a talent.. but you didnt realise it.. your beat is good.. and your melody is good. its underground track.. bass have some real depth.. but think about your voice. do you think your voice match for this song.. this is like Usher raps for Lil' Jon's Song.. think about the different what im saying.. dude im not Insulting.. dont get me wrong.. you have a talent.. but u used it wrong.. and your lyrics not good..coz its not matching for the beat and there is no floor. .think there is no rhyming... you just reading a paper or osmething..

this is my idea.. but you can improve.. ill give you some beats if you can do some lyrics and if you can rap.. then we can come up with something good..

[Centisuru]

yo bro, wanna ask u smethin, who has done da mixin & Mastering??? Dats da main problem in it.. Coz ur voice is only on da track, its not mixed wit da track...
N Ur rappin Floor is k, but u have to practice it.. coz i think u rappin while u readin da lyrics rite? When u do da recordings u have to remember yo lyrics, otherwise u cant get da rite floor u want, Dont missunderstand me, i'm tellin these as an Artist, So track is a underground track, its good, n u have to find a good producer, n improove ur rappin tallent, Dats wat i have to tell u

Peaz!!!!
Isuru
Centigradz

[Red_Rum]

LICH can you give me a direct link for this
couz machan i cant downlord in this way

please

[seong619]

Yo!

Thanks a lot! Same things ma friends said. Anyway? Thanks a lot! I'm glad you gave honest replies. I'll keep everything in ma mind when I'm making ma next track.

[Lich]

this is the Direct link for that track

i have uploaded it again to a server check it out..


http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/7/8/117935/C_Town-_Chinksta.mp3

[Michael]

this is the Direct link for that track

i have uploaded it again to a server check it out..


http://www.fileden.com/files/2006/7/8/117935/C_Town-_Chinksta.mp3

Thank you lich aiye..........:D :D

[nisaantha]

nice beat and everything you have a lot of potential man, just it s just the way that it is produced which is wrong. u need to put a bit of feeling in to ya song. eg if u say
smoking weed u have to make the listener feel it picture it. You need to take ya game up another notch and u ll be fine. its not like other site's pple at ela kiri dont diss and hate they support. This is the best place to spread dat VIBE.

[seong619]

Thanks again! I'm keeping everything in mind. I'm already making a brand new track, and I'm keep everything in ma mind. And does anyone here have any sinhala beats? Thank you Elakiri.com! :) You guys are reali helpful!

[DJ.Parker]

Thanks again! I'm keeping everything in mind. I'm already making a brand new track, and I'm keep everything in ma mind. And does anyone here have any sinhala beats? Thank you Elakiri.com! :) You guys are reali helpful!


Well u r still 14 so in a age of 14 u've done a great job. I think u have plenty of tym to be a pro.......I mean u can. So master ur skills and Lich and other musicians surely will help u :yes: :D