Lets make a rhyming poem...

[Lil_chica]

Simply add something to rhyme with the last word...
If we all do this right ...we will have the longest rhyming poem ever! so yeah make it funny, sweet, cheeky...anythin...jst make sure it rhyms

Note: when doing so ..copy the existing bit and add your own bit to it...which obviously makes it easier for us all to understand the poem...Cheers! ;)

Elakiri Poem :

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme

[malshan]

NICE CMPI..........

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time

[DJ.Parker]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again

[Tissaka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
Yte gtef ihdta lkien anfs tk liangeu mne fuilashina rlahj

:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
time moving so slow it could virtually bend

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
time moving so slow it could virtually bend

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain

[DJ.Parker]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still palys on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong!

[DJ.Parker]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still palys on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong!

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat

[Nero]

nice

[azrah ghaffoor]

omg..u guys rockk

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side

[Tissaka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat
Ijsh hyedf lku nsjhf iwnfia kjnaf jki jnfuao lmfhaiw jfap qeoxlfjw rpaz namfiglw

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..


And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lil_chika and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lil_chika was fun tc!

[ama_li]

Whoa..gud work lasanka & lil. keep it up. v hv gr8 poets here.

[lasanka]

Whoa..gud work lasanka & lil. keep it up. v hv gr8 poets here.
hey amali tnx heheh ya lil_chika is really gud.. hehe glad u like it..

[Kasunm]

wow lasa this is gr8 i haven't seen the poet inside you till now keep it up.and to you too chika baby lolzzz gr8 idea men keep it up.too bad i'm not a poet start this tonight too will you

[iboo]

the inner soul of ur hearts has spoken.... That poem was coool

[lasanka]

hey tnx guys!

[Lil_chica]

hey tnx guys!
:yes: :yes: YEah thank you!

[lasanka]

:yes: :yes: YEah thank you!
heyyy how u!

[Lil_chica]

heyyy how u!
Im great thanx how is ure self? im in college now :( argg LOl...why dont u carry on wrirting the poem? ...I'll try to think of few lines :D

[Tissaka]

what's up guys? :D

[lasanka]

Im great thanx how is ure self? im in college now :( argg LOl...why dont u carry on wrirting the poem? ...I'll try to think of few lines :D
umm k but ill be bak in a bit k.. say 15 mins ... its ur turn to start the verse..

[Lil_chica]

umm k but ill be bak in a bit k.. say 15 mins ... its ur turn to start the verse..
oOOoOooO OooOkaY lOL ;) lEMME tHINK ermmmm......

[lasanka]

oOOoOooO OooOkaY lOL ;) lEMME tHINK ermmmm......
okies im bk... waitin for ur line heheh

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

[Lil_chica]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me

[Lil_chica]

And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lasanka and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lasanka was fun tc! hehe

[puja]

WOOOOW ITS SO NICE POEM

[lasanka]

WOOOOW ITS SO NICE POEM
hehe tnx for ur commetn !

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me

[lasanka]

And thats the end FOR TODAY! the poem will be closed for now...
on behalf of Lasanka and myself we welcome ur comments on our poem thus far..
and would appreciate the feedback... tnx guys and gals tc!

ps- tnx Lasanka was fun tc! hehe
yep thats all for today guys hope u like it...
ive quoted Lil_chica and shes worded the sign off to perfection.. :)

[DJ.Parker]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me



Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitatiing to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me
The blaze of the pain still inflames me
I wonder whether we can live with peaceful spree

[lasanka]

umm dude.. sozz but didnt u see the closing post??? :(

[DJ.Parker]

umm dude.. sozz but didnt u see the closing post??? :(

nopes. lol hehe its all good;)

[lasanka]

heheh cool cool ! will consider ur additions though :lol:

[DJ.Parker]

heheh cool cool ! will consider ur additions though :lol:

u shud cos there are two lines at the end if ur not considerin mine

[lasanka]

Listen to the song in your heart and make this rhyme
let ur soul move to the vibe, let it flow with time
the clock ticks over and over again
wonders if this will be the longest chain
through it all there still lingers the pain
It seems like raining I'd better catch the train

The music still plays on, with each beat of my heart it grows strong
I can't take it I can't hold it for long
all sense of time is lost to this song
the feelings so intence, a real burden to be bourn
but the path so clear through it all, i feel the urge to carry on
my heart, my soul my life itself feels as if i were torn..

listen to the heart beat it has a connection with the drum beat
groovin tru and tru ur presence is really turnin up the heat
baby lets get closer, its no harm and anyone else dont compete
the rythem breakin, heart beat racin ur sweet caress whence we meet
Im out of my mind, Im loosing control, I'm loving the way you treat
Baby u and me were meant to be, together were impossible to beat

The trumpets sound, the crowds await, i need u by my side
I'll be right by ur side, Jst promise me that you'll always be mine
Uve given me the strength i need, im urs till the end of time
May us b together forever like this , coz our loves forever entwined
Feelings so deep a love so true, its fate our love combined
together we stand, hand in hand, let love be our guide..

The night is nearly ending, and this will be a new beginning
Side by side onward we stride, a love thats worth believing
both of us are wrapped up and entwined into a totally new meaning
throwing caution to the wind, our hearts together beating
slowly. hesitating to make our hearts one, we know that this is what it is meant to feel like, our hearts beat faster and faster
i look into ur eyes, im revitalized, well be together now and for ever after

After passion comes jealousy, your eyes slowly drifting from me
The flames still alit its ur love alone that surges through me
Lost in the blaze emotions gone wild
how fragile it seems but yet so mild
the constant reminder as i lean to my right
to meet ur sweet gaze be it dat or night..

k dats all for today.. k parker took ur idea but ur lines didnt exactly fit in sorry bro.. but umm tnx u can add soem tomorrow.. but read the whole thign when ur post dude ur last line was kinda repetitive.. tnx ,am

[DJ.Parker]

hehe ait ait:D

[lasanka]

hehe ait ait:D
tnx due.. !