Because of u..............

[azrah ghaffoor]

That night when i was alone with u
in the dark forest.
how i wished you would hold me,
how i wished you would kiss me,
how i longed to be in your arms.

I was cold and shivering
you noticed it but still kept shouting
shouting for nothing
shouting at me when it was not my fault.

How i loved u,
how i cared,
but did u even think?,
how you broke my heart,
hoe you made me feel,
how alone i was.

You laughed t the way i was crying,
i was so weak
you dint feel
you coudnt feel
you were like stone
so hard.so dead

Now do you realise?
that i am no longer with u
how much i loved u
how much i gave u
your shedding tears..for whom???some1 u never loved.

Remember i gave you everything, you dint love me back, now its you who will have to suffer!
hey.ppl tell me wat u think about ma poem...

[malshan]

elaaaaaaa

[lasanka]

hey yaa its um nyc heheh
u made it urself?
gud gud

[azrah ghaffoor]

hey yaa its um nyc heheh
u made it urself?
gud gud
hehe???????????????????????????????? yea i did y???is it bad

[azrah ghaffoor]

elaaaaaaa
;)

[Tissaka]

Who is this "U"? :D :lol:

Anyway.. Nice one sis.. keep it up.. all the best ;)

[azrah ghaffoor]

Who is this "U"? :D :lol:

Anyway.. Nice one sis.. keep it up.. all the best ;)
u is som1..lolll...thanks

[Kasunm]

omg you were in a forest were there any lions or or any tigers(4 legged type) or any deadly animals

[heshan123]

If this is a real experience I think you should give him/her another chance.

[xXxHaNzxXx]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...datz soooooooooo saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad...buh itz welll goooood...:D

[Nero]

thx

[shaggy]

That night when i was alone with u
in the dark forest.
how i wished you would hold me,
how i wished you would kiss me,
how i longed to be in your arms.

I was cold and shivering
you noticed it but still kept shouting
shouting for nothing
shouting at me when it was not my fault.

How i loved u,
how i cared,
but did u even think?,
how you broke my heart,
hoe you made me feel,
how alone i was.

You laughed t the way i was crying,
i was so weak
you dint feel
you coudnt feel
you were like stone
so hard.so dead

Now do you realise?
that i am no longer with u
how much i loved u
how much i gave u
your shedding tears..for whom???some1 u never loved.

Remember i gave you everything, you dint love me back, now its you who will have to suffer!
hey.ppl tell me wat u think about ma poem...

gud 1 azz :( :(

[jordan]

nice poem
gr8

[Djpata]

azza nice one gal;) ,bt so mny poemz deze ha?:rolleyes:

[azrah ghaffoor]

omg you were in a forest were there any lions or or any tigers(4 legged type) or any deadly animals
uhum noo..but there were snakes and other creepy stuff lol

[azrah ghaffoor]

azza nice one gal;) ,bt so mny poemz deze ha?:rolleyes:
hehe yea..thanks:D

[azrah ghaffoor]

nice poem
gr8
thanks

[azrah ghaffoor]

gud 1 azz :( :(
thanks huny...aww y u sad??

[azrah ghaffoor]

thx
np

[azrah ghaffoor]

If this is a real experience I think you should give him/her another chance.
ive given him enough chances

[shanX]

KWL :)

I know the whole story ;)

[azrah ghaffoor]

Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh...datz soooooooooo saaaaaaaaaaaaaaaad...buh itz welll goooood...:D
i know...yayyaa thanks!

[Wal Bada]

Good. Why don't you post it in the poems section?

[azrah ghaffoor]

KWL :)

I know the whole story ;)
thanks...hehe yea i know u know;) i wishh that day dint end like that:( :(

[azrah ghaffoor]

Good. Why don't you post it in the poems section?
lol dint know there was a poemz section

[Wal Bada]

There is for sure. There are few other sites which are dedicated entirely for serious sinhalese, tamil and english poetry. But the following two are my favorites.

1. http://sharepoetry.com - This is an international site dedicated for english poets. (there are many Asians too in the site with beautiful creations)

2. http://www.kaviarana.net - This is a SL site, dedicated for Sinhalese and English poetry.

There are few others, I will drop them when I get hold of them