My first "Nisdasa" to Elakiri......... 'Kodukara kawiya'

[kathushe]

Read this & Pls give me some comments guys, girls.......Thanks



Hiru kumaru ebena
Sundara himidiriyaka
Mal pipee lela denaa depasa
Punchi guru paaraka
Lan lanwa paa thabaa obath samagin
Avidinna aasai……

Kaath kauruwath nethi
Hudekalaa ek viraamayaka
Thanivee obath samagin
Lanvee oba hadawathata
Mal mal kathaa
Mumunanna aasai……

Madin mada rala nagena
Sudo sudu werala theerayaka
Basayana hiruta horen
Gena obe mudu athangili
Papuwata obaagena dothinma
Jeevithaya vindinnata aasai…….

Seethala mada pahan rayeka
Thurullata gena oba mage
Thiya nalalathata tholpethi
Mudu sumudu haaduwak
Thawaranna aasai……………

[Michael]

Lassanai.......Keep It Up.............:cool: :cool: :cool:

[sld]

Nicely done... Congrats.
Keep up the good work. :yes: :yes: :yes:

[kathushe]

:cool: :cool: Thanks Michael, thanks sld........Thank u v much 4 ur comments. I'll post some more in the near future.........!!!:cool: :cool:

[sld]

:cool: :cool: Thanks Michael, thanks sld........Thank u v much 4 ur comments. I'll post some more in the near future.........!!!:cool: :cool:
Anytime dude :yes: :yes:

[crazy_m]

:yes: Yes it's very nice.Waiting 4 more:yes:

[Djpata]

:yes: Yes it's very nice.Waiting 4 more:yes:

Eka Thamai Neda Crazy Eka Lassanai Neda N We Need More Like That:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

[kathushe]

Eka Thamai Neda Crazy Eka Lassanai Neda N We Need More Like That:lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

Thanks Crazy_M, Thanks DjPata.....I'll post some more later. But I don't know much gaphics to present it nicely........ :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool:

[devi_wasundara]

shah mara lasanai eka

mka kiyavaddi mage hithata ave ara tamil sinduva

chinna china aasai
siragalagu maasai
muththu muthu aasai
mudindavatha aasai
yenna vida thuttu
muththa vida aasai..
yenna ida puvi..
...............

[shaggy]

shah mara lasanai eka

mka kiyavaddi mage hithata ave ara tamil sinduva

chinna china aasai
siragalagu maasai
muththu muthu aasai
mudindavatha aasai
yenna vida thuttu
muththa vida aasai..
yenna ida puvi..
...............

palaweni lines 4 nam hari :yes: :yes: :yes:

Anthima lines 3 oyage lyrics mage hithe Lolzzzz :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:

orginal chinna chinna aasai eke thiyenne wena ekak ;) :cool:

[shaggy]

Nice work macho :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes:

[kathushe]

:cool: :cool: :cool: Mama hithuwe nee mechchara comments evi kiyalaa......!!! Eththatama sathutui. Thanks devi_wasundara.........!! Thanks shaggy.......!! I'll put some more..........:D :D :D :D :cool: :cool: :cool: :cool: :yes:

[nikini]

Read this & Pls give me some comments guys, girls.......Thanks



Hiru kumaru ebena
Sundara himidiriyaka
Mal pipee lela denaa depasa
Punchi guru paaraka
Lan lanwa paa thabaa obath samagin
Avidinna aasai……

Kaath kauruwath nethi
Hudekalaa ek viraamayaka
Thanivee obath samagin
Lanvee oba hadawathata
Mal mal kathaa
Mumunanna aasai……

Madin mada rala nagena
Sudo sudu werala theerayaka
Basayana hiruta horen
Gena obe mudu athangili
Papuwata obaagena dothinma
Jeevithaya vindinnata aasai…….

Seethala mada pahan rayeka
Thurullata gena oba mage
Thiya nalalathata tholpethi
Mudu sumudu haaduwak
Thawaranna aasai……………

Hiru kumaru nagen e
Mal kakulu pibideddi
Pinibindu nobidenna
Punchi punchi pa thaba
Awidinnam oba samagina

Nisansala wiramayaka
Hudakala imaka sita
Mal mada pawanata pamanak
Aa sarin mage sawanata
Rahasin mumunanna

hiru kumarui ksthija
ime sagaweddi
Sudupata rala awith
werala ima sipagaddi
dodanna biduwak adare gana ithin

sithala pahan rayaka
thurulata gena ithin mawa
dagakara kehiralla athkara nalalathen
mudu sumudu haduwak
denna mata adren

[Tuffey]

nice poem..................:D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Keep it up............:yes: :yes: :yes:

[Tuffey]

Hiru kumaru nagen e
Mal kakulu pibideddi
Pinibindu nobidenna
Punchi punchi pa thaba
Awidinnam oba samagina

Nisansala wiramayaka
Hudakala imaka sita
Mal mada pawanata pamanak
Aa sarin mage sawanata
Rahasin mumunanna

hiru kumarui ksthija
ime sagaweddi
Sudupata rala awith
werala ima sipagaddi
dodanna biduwak adare gana ithin

sithala pahan rayaka
thurulata gena ithin mawa
dagakara kehiralla athkara nalalathen
mudu sumudu haduwak
denna mata adren





that is also very nice.........Nikini.........

:yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes: :yes:

[kathushe]

:cool: :cool: :cool: Wow nikini, that's sooo nice..... I have read ur poems before.... Keep up ur good work......:cool: :cool: :yes: :yes: :D :D

[Novindu]

no comments..... coz its sooo nice:D:D

[Oolu]

Read this & Pls give me some comments guys, girls.......Thanks



Hiru kumaru ebena
Sundara himidiriyaka
Mal pipee lela denaa depasa
Punchi guru paaraka
Lan lanwa paa thabaa obath samagin
Avidinna aasai……

Kaath kauruwath nethi
Hudekalaa ek viraamayaka
Thanivee obath samagin
Lanvee oba hadawathata
Mal mal kathaa
Mumunanna aasai……

Madin mada rala nagena
Sudo sudu werala theerayaka
Basayana hiruta horen
Gena obe mudu athangili
Papuwata obaagena dothinma
Jeevithaya vindinnata aasai…….

Seethala mada pahan rayeka
Thurullata gena oba mage
Thiya nalalathata tholpethi
Mudu sumudu haaduwak
Thawaranna aasai……………


Kiyanna hithe thiyena semade
Ahase dilena Punchima Punchi Tharuwakata
Ahanna a Tharuwenma Nube ADARE
Kohedei Kiya.....................

[SANJEE]

heeeyyyy.......... kathuu meeka nam anthima top......... harima lassanai........ daala hugak adawas unaata mama dan nee dakke......... lassanai my friend meeka...... maxaa.........

mee part eka harima lassanai.....

Madin mada rala nagena
Sudo sudu werala theerayaka
Basayana hiruta horen
Gena obe mudu athangili
Papuwata obaagena dothinma
Jeevithaya vindinnata aasai…….

kathuu uba nam niyama ma kaviyek machoo.......

[SANJEE]

Kiyanna hithe thiyena sema de
Ahase dilena Punchima Punchi Tharuwakata
Ahanna a Tharuwenma Nube ADARE
Kohedei Kiya.....................

lassanai oolu oyaage reply ekath........ niyamai eeka.........

palaweni line ekee kiyannam hithee thiyena sema deema kiyala needa enne........

[Oolu]

lassanai oolu oyaage reply ekath........ niyamai eeka.........

palaweni line ekee kiyannam hithee thiyena sema deema kiyala needa enne........

Ow Hithe thiyena hemadema

[Kasunm]

ela ela

[Oolu]

ela ela

Kaviyada:confused: :confused:

[SANJEE]

Kaviyada:confused: :confused:

nethuwa..........? :eek:

[kathushe]

Thanks 4 everybody.....!!! Excellent....I'll write more....Thanks again guys...!!! Love u all.....

[MCLINER]

OH NICE
KEEP IT UP

[MCLINER]

Thanks 4 everybody.....!!! Excellent....I'll write more....Thanks again guys...!!! Love u all.....
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