Sorun (My own short story)

[sameeralord]

Hello everyone,

I'm new here. I live in Australia and went to the sinhala school there. I wrote this short story as a part of an assignment and teacher sent it to a local sinhala paper in Melbourne called "Tikiri". Tikiri is online as well. I just saw this section in the forum. So I thought I might as well put it here. Your comments would be very much appreciated.
Hope it is not GON:D

http://www.thummansala.com/Tikiri/Tikiri_October2007/Tikiri_October_JPG/page_14.jpg

[MCLINER]

hey cool work bro..keep it up

[isharackp]

Welcome to Elakiri bro..
keep posting & keep up the good work...:yes: :D :yes: :D

[Boman]

Nicely written...Keep it up your talents n keep posting your writings..thanks

[sriflipflop]

I will read later and give comments

[Ranhiru]

WOW!! U r good machan!! Nice story! Keep up da good work and keep posting in EK!

[chiraa]

Hello everyone,

I'm new here. I live in Australia and went to the sinhala school there. I wrote this short story as a part of an assignment and teacher sent it to a local sinhala paper in Melbourne called "Tikiri". Tikiri is online as well. I just saw this section in the forum. So I thought I might as well put it here. Your comments would be very much appreciated.
Hope it is not GON:D

http://www.thummansala.com/Tikiri/Tikiri_October2007/Tikiri_October_JPG/page_14.jpg

Wow. You got the talent bro!:yes: It's not gon. It's ELAKIRI! :yes::D Keep writing and all the best.:yes::D

[anarkalee]

ela

[milinda serasinghe]

it's a good novel i like it verymuch

[sameeralord]

You guys are so supportive. Thanks heaps for everyone who replied to this topic ;). I'm motivated to write more now:D

[binu_rulz]

You guys are so supportive. Thanks heaps for everyone who replied to this topic ;). I'm motivated to write more now:D
Oh yea man and Welcome to EK keep up da gud wrk we have our own resident Poets and Authors read Nikini's meedum Kandulu

[moonlight]

Yeah.. Its realy nyc... keep it up friend... & well come to Ek family

[blackroses]

wow........ itz coool............ lassanai machanz............ keep it up...............

[Kalindugayan]

god job

[nEoN_wHitE]

wow dis is seriously a gr8 story :D:D:D:yes: weldone bro.. u got some talant..

u live in melbourne?? where??:D

[Koombiya]

Sameera>>
Ahamben Blacka ewuwa link ekakin meka kiyewuwe...
Kathawa lassanayi..

Meke kiyawena Kathandaraya Sameeragema creation ekakda? ehema nathnam folk story ekak wage ekak asurin liyapu ekakda?

anyway, Mamath mekata kamathiyi...
"Saba sorun sitinne apa thulamaya..." kiyana line eka hari niyamayi... eeken mulu text ekema aruth eka thanakata gannawa....!

Sameerege anik works balannath kamathiyi api...

Suba pathum...!

[Clerk_Kent]

Nicely done bro...as i think the name of the prince does not match srilanka..But very nice advice given..Very good..Keep up the good work...:yes:

[sameeralord]

Once again thank you so much for your support. I thank each and everyone who have replied to the topic. I very much apreciate the comments :yes:. Thanks a lot:D

Now answer few questions

@binu_rulz: Thanks a lot for your comments:D. Yeah I saw Nikini's story. If it was a short story I would have read and replied straight away. It is a novel so I will reply to her topic after I finish reading it. Would take some time!!:yes:

@Koombiya and Blackroses: Thanks a lot for your comments as well :D. I should thank black roses for sending you the link too:D. Atthatama kisima keti kattawak natthan jana kathawak asurin nemeyi mama meke kathawa liyuwe. Ee wunata meke dena paniwayade adahasa mata labune nisala wila kiyana potha kiyaweemen. Habai kathawanan mama liyuwa ekak.:rolleyes:

@Clerk_Kent: Spot on!!:yes: I realized that too after this was published. Yeah that was a big mistake. Really sorry:D. Next time I won't make the same mistake. Thanks a lot for your comments:D

@nEoN_wHitE: Thanks for the comments:D. I live in essendon. Which suburb do you live?

For all the others who replied thank you so much once agin :D:D

[terrencekpeiris]

Very good malli! Keep it up!

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[akila101]

good work..... keep it up
& welcome to EK

[bonji]

nice work
make sure u roling

[2naja]

niyamai,

mau bashawa amathaka wena parisarayaka edagena oya karala thiyana karyaya apurui.

jaya!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!