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08-06-2009, 09:04 AM
The poem express your feeling and pain clearly
Its a very touching poem,
really you have the magic of writing that your each and every poem becomes the mirror which reflects your heart and its pain truly
comeon cutee
move ahead in your life
I want to read your poem having the feeling of joy next time
However, as a poem, liked the careful choice of words used to depict your feelings and its rhythm in most places
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