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Clerk_Kent

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Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

 

westpra

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• Apr 21, 2008

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Nice 1 machan..keep writing....

 

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dilansri2

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• Apr 21, 2008

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wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww

elane machoo

maxxa

keep it up

 

Tharshi

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• Apr 21, 2008

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Clerk_Kent said:

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

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nice 1 ayye.dont make it a dream make it come true

 

Sonique

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• Apr 21, 2008

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Clerk_Kent said:

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

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Kello 3k unahama ohoma thama

 

Kinu

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nyc 1 aiyye

 

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dewasmitha

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nice one aiya,keep writing

 

emimaxy

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in ma paradise

• Apr 21, 2008

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wow kenta maxxa
keep it up
maaara porak welane

 

maleemsg

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ලගින්ඒත් ඈතින්

• Apr 21, 2008

• #9

sometimes dreams may come true..!!!

welldone aiya..!!
Keep it up!

 

Clerk_Kent

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Thanks All

 

shiwankaswe

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• Apr 21, 2008

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Clerk_Kent said:

Guys this is my first poem...with lot of errors...
Just made my feelings to words & typed it on a picture..
Don't know if this is a poem....
please comment & show me the errors I made...

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kentooooooooooooo

elama thama

mama kiwweeee
uba liyala thiyenne arayata thamaaaaaaaaaaaaa

 

shiwankaswe

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• Apr 21, 2008

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machan uba Only You kiyala adahas kale keedenekwada

 

tckrockz

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machan menna error 1k
last verse eke 3rd line eka
"But I now Know That"
eka
"But Now I Know That"
karana ethkota lassani

 

rotiya

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~> R0CKC!TY KURUN3G4L4 <~

• Apr 21, 2008

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elooooooooooooooooo
niyamai ne
apoooooooooooooooo cha
upset hinda ela keewe

 

G-Force

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• Apr 21, 2008

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Ammtasiri...elakiri ne...

 

rash87

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Nice one CK

 

Clerk_Kent

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tckrockz said:

machan menna error 1k
last verse eke 3rd line eka
"But I now Know That"
eka
"But Now I Know That"
karana ethkota lassani

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Thx Machoo.....

 

Shiwantha

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ela niyamaine machooo

 

tckrockz

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Clerk_Kent said:

Thx Machoo.....

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anytime mcho

 

Clerk_Kent

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shiwankaswe said:

machan uba Only You kiyala adahas kale keedenekwada

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owa ithin 5 gunaakaara walin kiyala thiyenne....